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Orphans and Foundlings Page 4

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Omg! Wat ish wrong?! :noes: You're gonna have to wait till the next page to find out :fuzzydemon:

I really like the first panel :)
I really DISLIKE the last panel :( it's probably my least favourite of the whole strip (sorry little Turtle Tot)

The sequential panels are a little wonky because I didn't have any means to trace them and merely had to rely on looking and trying to recreate 8( so sorry about that. Drawing Sequential panels is so damn HARD to do purely by hand without tracing!

XD this is how I wake up in the mornings... only like... times 10. It was pretty late before Splinter finally got to sleep.

Meh, not my favourite page :\ moving on~

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This one is pretty simple, but it gets the idea across.

I think the camera work is fine, there's not a lot you can do with a camera to help tell this little piece of the story. It's all down to the acting, really. And in that respect, I think you got it right.

Ugh, those eyes again...

I really like Splinter's body language in this one. He really looks like he's just woken up, and is taking his time to sort of blink the little tyke in focus. Whichever Turtle that is in the final panel there also has the right body language. That sort of imploring expectancy. Should've expected as much from a great animator in-training.