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At first, I didn't know what to draw, for I did not want to place something I would regret later on, and I do have to admit that I don't have any artistic skills, so what can I add? Then, an idea hit me. Since he didn't seem to mind, I first drew what I hoped looked like grapevines, around the upper and lower collars, decorating it a little, before I started with long, thin strokes, drawing Japanese characters.
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lame title is lame
More fanart from ~AmeMusashi's fics. This time from a lovely little oneshot called "words"
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I'm not overly happy with this. It's lightyears better than what the original picture looked like and I'm damn happy I decided to redraw it from scratch but I'm still not overly pleased with it ;___; Once again sorry Amemusashi! I promise I'll get it right one day!
I had so many issues with this picture. From head sizes to poses to composition to colour. I struggled every step of the way so I hope it's at least somewhat decent ;____;
On a fanon (for lack of a better word) level, Although the excerpt I use talks of using Japanese kanji later on it talks of Chinese characters and I don't know if the two were mixed or not. As it stands I used simplified chinese for the kanji on the cast. sorry if that was wrong also I wasn't quite sure where to put the vines exactly simply cuz I'm a noob
And lastly (and this is a biggie) The ficlet is written in a way I adore in which we are never told who is speaking or who is narrating, leaving it up to the reader to simply know based o personalities and responses to the situation (which i've never seen any one in ANY fanbase have the balls to attempt before) so I hope I got the characters right!! ..otherwise this picture would be the biggest cosmic fail of all time.
Anyway once again I need to go to bed cuz I stay up too late drawing this stuff
So here is a little fraternal mush for every-one. It's by far not perfect, but I hope it'll do.
and it's not yaoi >(
I needed some tenderness in my life right now.
good night~
Please don't repost, take, recolour, trace or reupload my art! not on dA or your blog or anywhere else! thank you
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lame title is lame
More fanart from ~AmeMusashi's fics. This time from a lovely little oneshot called "words"
[link]
I'm not overly happy with this. It's lightyears better than what the original picture looked like and I'm damn happy I decided to redraw it from scratch but I'm still not overly pleased with it ;___; Once again sorry Amemusashi! I promise I'll get it right one day!
I had so many issues with this picture. From head sizes to poses to composition to colour. I struggled every step of the way so I hope it's at least somewhat decent ;____;
On a fanon (for lack of a better word) level, Although the excerpt I use talks of using Japanese kanji later on it talks of Chinese characters and I don't know if the two were mixed or not. As it stands I used simplified chinese for the kanji on the cast. sorry if that was wrong also I wasn't quite sure where to put the vines exactly simply cuz I'm a noob
And lastly (and this is a biggie) The ficlet is written in a way I adore in which we are never told who is speaking or who is narrating, leaving it up to the reader to simply know based o personalities and responses to the situation (which i've never seen any one in ANY fanbase have the balls to attempt before) so I hope I got the characters right!! ..otherwise this picture would be the biggest cosmic fail of all time.
Anyway once again I need to go to bed cuz I stay up too late drawing this stuff
So here is a little fraternal mush for every-one. It's by far not perfect, but I hope it'll do.
and it's not yaoi >(
I needed some tenderness in my life right now.
good night~
Please don't repost, take, recolour, trace or reupload my art! not on dA or your blog or anywhere else! thank you
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First of all I think you did the lighting very well. Their eyes are nicely done as well. I think what would really make it complete would be to make Leo's mask just as detailed as the other pieces of fabric. Perhaps a little highlight from the second light source on the bridge of his face. Your work on the rain on the window is very nice. I think overall my biggest suggestion would be to have slightly darker darks to really make the shadows seem deeper. In areas such as between them and under their chins.
Very nicely done otherwise.