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Orphans and Foundlings page 7 by =C-Puff:iconC-Puff:


©2009 =C-Puff
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I had a very bad day today, so this page was very cathartic to do.

TMNT fans know Splinter may not be a spring chicken but he's got stamina to spare, so the fact that he's been searching so hard and so long that he's out of breath should tell you something.
He's been gone the entire day, and he needs to get back :( The remaining little ones need food and they're no doubt already very scared at being left alone for so long. So don't be angry at the rat master, he's planning on going out again as soon as he can to keep looking, but after a full day his hopes aren't very high.

I made very sure not to use the sentence "Abandon my search" in this page. It would not have fit due to the subtext of that phrase.

And no I've never heard of perspective before 8DD


TMNT (c) Mirage
TMNT font (c) Mirage or Lionsgate or Maple or SOME-ONE
Fonts downloaded from [link]

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:iconknightgainax:
OK, by some odd cockup, I ended up commenting on the last four paqes instead of the middle four. I'm damn sure I clicked on the right thing... anyway...

I like Splinter's body language in this one. Illustrates his emotional state quite nicely. Your backgrounds in this one are killer, I must say. Your camera work if fairly decent too.

The way you used monotone for this comic makes me think of something that you showed me. What's that one with little white dude, where the entire comic is also done in monotone black? Ugh, it's on the tip of my tongue...
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:iconmyxwoundedxsoul:
AWwwww, ppoor splinter. I hope he finds raphie soon. D8

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\\\"are people born wicked? Or do they wickedness thrust upon them?\\\"

"It is the ninjabot...not the weapon."
:iconc-puff:
*nods* he's pretty wrecked :(

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Just as Swordsmanship is more than fighting, art is more than drawing. The field would be richer if more artists embraced this lesson
--Robert Asprin

Do what you like and do it honestly
--Angels and Airwaves
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Awww... Poor Splinter... Poor Raphie... Poor everybody!

Hope that Raphie hasn't gotten himself into too much trouble.

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House: "You're wearing that shirt for someone."
Wilson: "The Health Department. They frown on topless oncology."

- House - Frozen
:iconsilverpaw15:
*blinks, stunned.* Where could Raph be? Don't tell me he's somehow managed to go topside?! O_O

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"Everything I do, I do for a reason."
:iconphantom-griffin:
I am loving this. The emotion you convey is simply perfect!

The turtle tots are too adorable as well, makes me just want to hug 'em!

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"Jellicle Cats are black and white. Jellicle cats are rather small. Jellicle cats are merry and bright! And pleasant to hear when we caterwhaul!"
:iconlunarlotis:
:cries::cry::crying:

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Sometimes the truth is strainger then fiction
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Sorry about my bad spelling ><
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Icon base is by *Kiss-the-Iconist <3
:iconxrobin:
I really love the last panel, I can almost feel such emotion bursting from the way you drew Splinter. =3
Amazing so far, and of course I have high hopes that young Raphel will turn up soon. ^-^

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Chuck Norris once tried to roundhouse kick Billy Mays. Before his foot even left the ground, Chuck was already on his first of three easy payments of $29.95.
:iconhm24:
Awweeee, I love the emotion on his face! Poor Splinter. I also adore the baby turtle's in this.

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Ever feel like you've done a great job, only to find out later you could have done better
:iconc-puff:
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Just as Swordsmanship is more than fighting, art is more than drawing. The field would be richer if more artists embraced this lesson
--Robert Asprin

Do what you like and do it honestly
--Angels and Airwaves
:icon54viruses:
*pours glass of water* I'm sure you'll find him soon Splinter! *hands tuckered rat water*

Great job! I love your sewer backgrounds! (And the rat, much love for the rat!)

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Hello, my name is 54viruses.
I am addicted to literature.
It has been eleven hours since I last read or wrote...oh, wait...shoot, better luck next time.

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